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A Touch of Lunacy Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/15/09

hangin on a thread here

awwwwwwww too short... looking forward to further chapters... WELL DONE1

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by Hime_Himiko11/15/09

Can't wait til Chapter 3!

Loved your 2nd chapter. Can't wait for more. Excellent writing!

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by mechmanas11/15/09

more

doing good so far like the plot and love the characters.

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by LovelyDay11/15/09

Interesting

Please update soon. I like this so far

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by IndianChocolate11/16/09

Very Good

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!

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by bad_girl6911/16/09

Wonderful

I really loved this chapter. :) I cant wait for you to write the next one. Just please dont let her loose her fiery/fighting personality.lol. Donovan deserves a bit of butt kicking..lol.

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by cannd09/27/10

I like this story, I first found it at a later chapter. I find it interesting that a pack leader could behave the way Donovan has. He must be strong to not have others try to take the pack from him. I like how torn she was and how gentle he was after being such a brute when she met him. I think the pack's rules about how she could get free are a bit sick. It does sound like they're in favor of rape if the woman is caught up with and of course a wolf would find her.

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by aphroditeDD01/09/11

5 stars

I love EVERYTHING about this story. You have skills!

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by Anonymous10/10/11

Hopefully...

Sometime, during this story, Donovan will be sodomized by a white hot poker.

I'm sorry, he has killed several women trying to find a mate to rape until she loves him.

Are werewolf writers capable of portraying them as something other than rapists? I would really like to know...

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by Anonymous05/04/12

sorry to say not liking this Alpha at all, so it turned me off this story

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by Anonymous09/19/12

Great Story...

...can't wait to read the next chapter!

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