It is a disagreeable subject but I read the story because I like the author's other work. The low grade on this one is way off because it is extremely well executed and is bitter sweet. It tells me that the collective we, here does not know how to appreciate talent!
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Anonymous04/08/12
I gave it 4 stars...
... maybe I should have given it 5. It was deep yet concise with an interesting twist while giving a different slant on a tough subject. I should have made it 5.
English
Very Interesting.
Interesting story. I enjoyed reading it & I hope you will write more parts to this story.
Damn Fine Story
He never had a chance. As she said, "You can't escape me. You know it and I know it." He hadn't the strength to fight her.
Curious!!
Where is this going and what will happen? I cant wait to read more of their story. What has and will happen to them.
Short and awesome!
Damn! That ending was intense! I hope there is more to come that really whetted my appetite for more! Excellent work!
I can only imagine what he went through
if he were convicted of raping his daughter. This is really a sad story. Well done and well written.
Extremely well done and structured
It is a disagreeable subject but I read the story because I like the author's other work. The low grade on this one is way off because it is extremely well executed and is bitter sweet. It tells me that the collective we, here does not know how to appreciate talent!
I gave it 4 stars...
... maybe I should have given it 5. It was deep yet concise with an interesting twist while giving a different slant on a tough subject. I should have made it 5.
Sad
Reads like the prologue for a long suicide note.
It's sad
And rather grim, but all the same, five stars, if only for how much this disturbs me.
Wow
One of the better, more disturbing stories I've read here. Well written and well conceived. Kudos to you. The score should be much higher.
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