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by Anonymous02/28/08

good except for one thing

I had been dating an attorney for almost six months and although I thought she was a little sexual reserved in the beginning of our relationship, things were beginning to heat up as we got to be more comfortable with each other.

just a word to you about the above sentence. The aformentioned sentence is a run-on sentence. You need to rewrite it.

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