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Very good story
The pacing was nice; slow enough to have a build-up of tension, while still keeping things moving along. Your descriptions are wonderful, too. It's kind of a cliché plot, but your work made it unique. Thanks, and keep up the good work!
Nice touch
Very nice story and quite believeable . You should give us more ...
Great
Great story with that ring of reality.................
Very hot!
I'm not about to criticize your story. Your bio said 'some are real, some are fiction', I think this one's real. Having had similar real experiences, I can fully share and appreciate the thought process of the moment.You keep writing gal, each story will show improvement with more descriptive narratives.
Very enjoyable
A good story for a new writer. Can't wait to read more of your work.
Excellent
You have things down and the description just right. Don't stop, you have it and it's best to keep running with it.
Really fine tale!
Definitely a Five Star entry! I love bro/sis love stories and would like to see you take this one further. You have already set the stage in the ending of this story. Since I'm a real sucker for forever love, I hope their story will go on. This was a really outstanding first submission. I hope to see many more from you.
I am so hoping that this is a true story
A fantastic effort for a first story. A very good storyline and a good foundation for the characters to feel real. I would like to read more on the incestuous sex between the two. I have to say that you certainly have an erotic mind and I will look forward to reading anything that you post to the web. Thanks for the trip over the line of brother and sister love.
Nicely done!
Forbidden fruit is always sweeter.
unrealistic
there is no way he is going to fuck her if he was so mad just because she kissed him keep it atleast sounding somewhat realistic people do not go from being mad as hell to fucking in a matter of minuets days or months maybe
Good
Short but good story!
Length
Your story is too short, there's not enough build up. It goes from tears to fucking in almost a paragraph. The idea could be good but you gotta lengthen it
no, it's a very good story
It's no surprise that a girl wants her big brother's big cock up between her legs. Lots of brothers and sisters think that's exactly where a brother's cock belongs. And, no surprise at all, a brother very often thinks the same thing. Like Dan in the story, a boy will look over his kid sister and say to himself, "Shit, she's got a really sweet little cunt and my prick'd feel real good up there." So he fucks his baby sister and blows his brotherly balls up her cunt, then brother and sister do it over and over again.
A Believable Brother Sister Love Affair.
Very Good, Well written and a believable reaction of a brother and sister.
another sweet moment
I love her style of writing because it isn't about just fucking. Instead it explores the intimate side of things.
Loved it!
Very sensuous. Sounds believable to me, but then I don't have a sister. There are a bunch of stories on here with the same situation (emergency "date" for prom), but this is one of the best. I was upset at the way the brother broke things off at the dance; and I wonder if his interest in sex at home was partly out of guilt/shame that he had behaved badly at the dance. ?
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