All Comments on 'Amy'

It's a good start to an interesting story.

You know, I liked this but I feel a bit alienated. I think your language is a bit too florid for an erotic story, I find myself distracted from the story line by trying to remember what some of the words mean. Maybe that is just the character though. Maybe she is supposed to make me feel stupid?

I did like it though and I think you're a good writer.