I liked your wierd idea and the way you put it out there. I love offbeat thinking and I think you did a wonderful job. Thank you very much! It really struck me as just right.
This is superb and not a bit weird.
Especially if you realize that Willa Cather wrote the first American sex on train stories...
in the 19teens.
Inventive and new? Absolutely.
The prose here is sharp and clean, without missing an emotional beat. The story is creative bdsm without being crude and abusive. I'd say that's fuking refreshing! And hot.
Great short story!
very nice ... keep writing and sharing!
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