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Amid The Shadows

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by Anonymous

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by Magus_Ronin02/11/10

Intriguing start

You've captured my attention, I'll be interested to see where things go from here.

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by kiwiplum04/15/10

tenses

Good start, but it's a bit distracting having you change tenses from present to past.

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by Anonymous03/20/14

Don't read

Story isn't finished. No new chapters in over a year

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by GoesGrunt11/20/14

Don't Read

Even though a chapter was recently added to this unfinished story; go watch/read Twilight, True Blood or Vampire Diaries if you want something like this.

If you're sick of stories like those, don't waste your time with this one.

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