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Soooooperb !!
Oh brother ! what a story , never had thought I would ever read one like this!. Such original description of genuine High class Indian/Paki background turning swiftly into hot torrid incestual loving. Somehow, I have always believed , things happen like this in some of the very rich families.
There was a big disappointment,however. Why a devine offering like Gulnar Mehrun Khan should not be feasted on by her strong loving son too? please do include this, taking it to still higher level of a deep commitment and torrid sexual chemistry between the two.
Hats off again, maestro. Reading this story was an epic experience and pleasure. 10/10
salman
My GAWD!
It is certainly more that I expected. when I saw the title, Pt. 01, I thought it is just a 3-page installment. Wow, turns out it is 19 pages. I enjoy the story right from the first line and believe me, I didn't know I have finished 19 sheets when I saw the the familiar term "to be continued". By then I still wanted more. Thanks god there will be more to come! or don't you lie to me, lol.
Awesome writing
You have so much talent and this tale is so well written,it was a treat to read this erotic story on a rainy Sunday. Delighted to expect Ch.2, thanks for your work.
Wow ! Too good ! !
Wow ! Too good ! ! Don't have words to say. Excellent writting skill. Please continue.
GREAT PIECE OF EROTICA
An Indian Classic. Keep it up in the next part
Where have you been so long?
At last a great hot incest story teller. After reading two pages of good intentioned unsatisfying attempts here is someone who can write novel length with great panache. Please do post the remaining parts. This needs to be made available for public to read. Wonderful. There are many who would die to get their hands on your stories. Well done.
MARVELLOUS. UNBELIEVABLY GOOD
Very sexual and hot. What an imagination to create situations and bind all characters together. I am going to read and download all chapters and your other stories right now......
Simply marvellous
I think this style of writing needs to be nurtured. This is a style that will never go out of fashion. Good, robust sex with abounding love.
A must read
I read the comments and plunged on- AMAZING
Every bit of praise is well deserved. Few stories with such raw power and sophistication of characterisations. Many could find personalities not far removed they might have encountered.
TOP NOTCH BOOK. WHERE IS THE BUTTON FOR TEN STARS?
incestlover
fantastic.... neat descriptions
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