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I have to say this story ended better
than I expected, though he would have been better off if he hadn't wasted all those years waiting for the bitch. He could have been a decade or more into a relationship, not just starting one at 40 where he is including Tiny in his group. What's with his wife marrying someone else and excluding him? He and Allison were mistress and master to Myra, he should have been included in their marriage. Tammy was willing to be exclusive with Tiny just as Allison and Myra should be exclusive to each other and him. Once again Allison shows her disregard for him. All and all the story was well written as always but didn't do much for me.
An interesting romp through Fantasyland
I was unhappy on the first page of this chapter and considered calling it boring but in the end my view
turned a bit more positive. One problem is that I read the original version so none of the many twists and turns had any surprise in them for me. The other problem is that S-M
definitely turns me off.... But the author is creative!
1*
just bad.
This started out a good story
and really plummeted. There was a lot of emotional stuff to resolve and you just... didn't do it. Skipped over it to include a bunch of monotonous fucking.
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