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A Blowing At Your Command

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by Anonymous11/21/09

Niiice

Miss- Very good! You should keep writing...

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by Anonymous03/31/10

Almost there...

Loved the imagry and actions but i was hoping for a little more color in the descriptions of what you see. Features, eye color, emotion to their face... it all just further completes an already lovely fantasy. Like inking and finishing a work of art.

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