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When the Hero Looses

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by Anonymous11/20/09

Couldn't be bothered.

I don't have time to waste with authors who don't know the difference between 'loose' and 'lose'. If you have such a blatant misspelling in the TITLE, I can't even imagine how poorly written the actual story is.

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by Anonymous11/20/09

fuck the spelling teacher

your story was AMAZING! i had never read anything like it. i would appreciate it if you slowed down a little on the transformation scenes, because they were over too soon.

great story, please keep writing...

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