Very good descriptions. Realistic settings and actions. Keep it up
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Anonymous11/20/09
Pathetic
Don't quit your day job, dude. In fact, try for overtime to keep you away from further writing attempts. (Was thew first part of this series as pathetic as this one was?)
by
Anonymous11/21/09
Stop
Stop, stop, stop, fucking stop.
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Anonymous11/16/10
fuck
i made a mistake I ment to put a 1 on it but I have been reading good or better yet astounding ones so I put a 5 my bad
Good story has potential
Very good descriptions. Realistic settings and actions. Keep it up
Pathetic
Don't quit your day job, dude. In fact, try for overtime to keep you away from further writing attempts. (Was thew first part of this series as pathetic as this one was?)
Stop
Stop, stop, stop, fucking stop.
fuck
i made a mistake I ment to put a 1 on it but I have been reading good or better yet astounding ones so I put a 5 my bad
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