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TO LONG
MUCH MUCH MUCH TO LONG!!!!
My thoughts exactly:
You know I figured that sasha was the seductress. You did a great job on the plot to the story. It had everything: humor, seriousness, sex (without being cheap), etc... I loved the fact you had life meanings in there. I'm really looking forward to the next installment; you can't leave it like this can you ?... so many questions (i'd love for cara to find a good man).
lol, literally
i read for about 2 hours and finally had to skip to the end (sorry!). i was invested enough in the plot to at least want to see it wrapped up, even though i should have been asleep an hour ago. thanks for the laugh(s). hopefully at some point i'll go back and read the middle of your story, but until then at least i voted.
Amazing.
The story had EVERYTHING. If this was made into a book, I'd buy it.
excellent
Well thought out and well written. I thought he was going to fall in love with the seductress, but there you go. Will look forward to more stories...
Wow. :)
I thought it was a great story. It was VERY long, and I just decided to skip to the end around page 10. That doesn't mean I didn't enjoy it. It was a truly refreshing story. :) Definately worth the two-three hours of my night.
I am looking forward to some new stuff (maybe?) and will be watching. ;)
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