Mystique Ch. 02

Nice start up

I am very interested to see where you the take this story. Please continue to show John in real and human terms.

Excellent start

Keep it up

Good beginning

Good beginning and I am looking forward to the next chapter. Please a realistic approach. There are a few small technical items that could stand fixing but nothing that detracts from the story. Hurry please.

Good So Far

Interesting story, thanks.

Exciting developments

You have me hooked so far - please continue.
Thanks,
Norman

Very good story.

It has kept my interest and I look forward to the next chapter. Keep writing.

Awww pete ya took all the fun outa mi live

gettin registered an all. Now ya can be all pedantic and racist and get away with it, ya fuckin creep-fudgepackinpete.

Fudgepacker....

...rascist I'm not so much(everyone on planet earth is to some degree)-Pedantic?Isn't that a big word for you?-but you must be the chickenshit Pos.think or freddie fag from the hub huh? You're certainly a fucking coward.Must suck to have to use mirrors,huh?What a loser,poser.TROG keep going for the kill.Why did HE move out?

Very Good

Keep it going please.

Thanks for sharing.

Good one

Liked it! Bit quicker with the next episode please

good story - keep it coming

Nice work on this. Can't wait for the next installment.

Very enjoyable story! So far...

Why she should think that there is some useful explanation is beyond me. I mean, setting him up as a patsy to be robbed of his story by Dave would be enough for a divorce in my book and they had a fine level of incompatibility for a couple of years that is a second ground for divorce. I mean even it is all camera magic and no real fucking around on her husband she should have had prior permission before starting to do this kind of work. There would be no logical reason to even try to straighten things out, but the phrase at the end of the chapter leaves me worried that the author may plan on reconciliation...

Is trog short for troglodyte?? Must be, same IQ !