The Camping Trip

Great start!!

Stroking as I read, and just when I'm ready.....waiting for chapter II....PLEASE!!!!!

webshooter has already said it..."Great Start!"

Now please hurry with Chapter 2. Hot stuff, so far!

Can't wait for chapter 2

Great story. Very hot.

Great Start.....

I am always interested in stories which eventually end
up outdoors especially camping stories which have a
wider variety of scenarios for the story characters.

I noticed your little sneak preview into your story
when Don said, “Oh, yeah and to complete the primitive
experience, the showers and restrooms are all shared by
the campers,” Also that Tara started planning to tease
her brother Tim.

It sounds like your story may feature many exciting
adventures. I hope once they reach the primitive camp
area that you add a lot of details to your story.

Thank you.....

RecHiker

great start

looking for more please

verry hot

waiting for chapter 2

Great Start

Can't wait for chapter two

Short but well done, a good start to some hot sex

I hope that the next chapter will be soon. Really hot so far, and I can only imagine what the author has in store for the next chapter. Thanks

Anatomy?

Humans aren't built in a way that allows some of the activities this describes. Hot story (although proceeds too fast), but more of a science fiction flavor.

Yes, I loved it.

Oh come on. You must must continue this story. It is soo soo hot yet it is only starting.

don't stop!!

This is off to a great start!!!!!

wow

That was so hot. I cant wait to read the next chapter. Your stories always are great. Keep up the good work!

Makes no sense

Tim gets laid on a regular basis but he can't believe he's looking at her pussy? Makes no sense. Otherwise its a hot story. Needs chapter 2.

erotic story

Very erotic start but there shud be more teasing and more lusting ,ending with hard frustrated sex.Just do it man.......... don't stop .

A very nice start!

keep going

Damn was getting right into it and then it finished ,hope there is more to come,i was waiting for them to arrive at camp and eventually mum and dad join in

Make more

Please make more chapters it was just getting good

pussy

very good bu t should have finished the camping trip\

Camping trip

You end the story in a cliff hanger and that is piss poor writing

Hey what will they do

Please update this soon