All Comments on 'The Camping Trip'

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webshooter69webshooter69over 14 years ago
Great start!!

Stroking as I read, and just when I'm ready.....waiting for chapter II....PLEASE!!!!!

oldwayneoldwayneover 14 years ago
webshooter has already said it..."Great Start!"

Now please hurry with Chapter 2. Hot stuff, so far!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Can't wait for chapter 2

Great story. Very hot.

RecHikerRecHikerover 14 years ago
Great Start.....

I am always interested in stories which eventually end

up outdoors especially camping stories which have a

wider variety of scenarios for the story characters.

I noticed your little sneak preview into your story

when Don said, “Oh, yeah and to complete the primitive

experience, the showers and restrooms are all shared by

the campers,” Also that Tara started planning to tease

her brother Tim.

It sounds like your story may feature many exciting

adventures. I hope once they reach the primitive camp

area that you add a lot of details to your story.

Thank you.....

RecHiker

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
great start

looking for more please

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
verry hot

waiting for chapter 2

rbennerbenneover 14 years ago
Great Start

Can't wait for chapter two

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 14 years ago
Short but well done, a good start to some hot sex

I hope that the next chapter will be soon. Really hot so far, and I can only imagine what the author has in store for the next chapter. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Anatomy?

Humans aren't built in a way that allows some of the activities this describes. Hot story (although proceeds too fast), but more of a science fiction flavor.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Yes, I loved it.

Oh come on. You must must continue this story. It is soo soo hot yet it is only starting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
don't stop!!

This is off to a great start!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
wow

That was so hot. I cant wait to read the next chapter. Your stories always are great. Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Makes no sense

Tim gets laid on a regular basis but he can't believe he's looking at her pussy? Makes no sense. Otherwise its a hot story. Needs chapter 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
erotic story

Very erotic start but there shud be more teasing and more lusting ,ending with hard frustrated sex.Just do it man.......... don't stop .

debaucherdebaucherover 9 years ago

A very nice start!

NudieNomadsNudieNomadsover 9 years ago
keep going

Damn was getting right into it and then it finished ,hope there is more to come,i was waiting for them to arrive at camp and eventually mum and dad join in

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Make more

Please make more chapters it was just getting good

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
pussy

very good bu t should have finished the camping trip\

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Camping trip

You end the story in a cliff hanger and that is piss poor writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Hey what will they do

Please update this soon

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Ending?

This story stopped right when it was starting to get interesting. Where's part 2 or page 2?? Wow this is just laziness!!! 1 star for you!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

I agree it was getting interesting then it just stopped. Needs a part 2 at the camp ground. So many possibilities. Hiking and fucking,sneaking in the bath house together late at night etc.

Dream59Dream59about 2 years ago

Too bad you can't rate a story lower than 1 star.

eroenthusiasteroenthusiast11 months ago

This was awesome. I love teasing stories like this. Well done.

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