All Comments on 'A Business Function'

The characters here are very easy to associate with and the read is fluent. I was anticipating each line of text as I swallowed hard trying to get to the next sentence!

I have been in a similar situation but with a different result...how sweet it would be to find a lover that has the ability to make this fantasy a reality!

I am still rock hard from reading this story...

-Bo

I very much enjoy your writing. It is so much more than just what the characters do. It is also about how and why they do what they do and more importantly, how they feel about what they are doing. Just as it should be in real life. That is what makes your stories sexy. It is a pleasure to read them. Thanks very much.

Really enjoyed reading this story. I Haven't read exotic stories since Penthouse Forum so this was welcoming. Its so exciting/sexy that you describe in detail the scene and I couldn't wait to continue. My cock was hard from the start of the story as I glanced down a few lines. Can't wait to read more of your stories. Thank you for starting my Saturday morning with a nice release-Daddy