I was confused a little but had ti wait for the magic to take place. Had to read it all the way through. A sequel wouldn't be out of the question. Good luck in the contest.
DG Hear
The fantasy moved lightly across the two lives. Hope that the future is as pleasant for the young couple.
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Anonymous11/22/09
A Sprinkling of stardust!
A sprinkling of stardust shone out from this beautifully written story. It just flowed and kept my attention wondering how the ending would be and when I got there I wasn't disappointed.
Wishing you some of the stardust and good luck in the competition.
This is a perfect Christmas story! Make anyone want to believe in Santa again. Your stories keep getting better!
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Anonymous11/22/09
Dreams DO come true! Bravo!
Loved it! Christmas is my favorite time of year and even at my age, I do believe in magic and that there is a Santa even if he is in a little bit of all of us. Though at this time in my life, the Christmas's are a bit different, they are still anticipated as they were when I was young. When you tell your stories, I can hear the conversation and smell the smells such as the new real tree and the stews. Thank you! When I read a story, I am taken away to another time...a vacation. To their time and place. Well done!!! (Beau)
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Anonymous11/22/09
Tears and a 10
Once I get there tears out of my eyes... This was wonderful. I feel the magic stronger now than in 20 years. A 5 star rating isn't high enough! Ten, ten I say!
From: Agnes Brickman -- To: Abby -- I am suing for alienation of affection as Sam proposed to me when he brought my packets, hours before he came to your office! ~~~~ Really super Santa story, I enjoyed it immensely. Good luck in the contest.
I like this type of stories. You did a very good one. But please check this part before you give your story into contest. He was intrigued by the way her eyes revealed her emotions. They told him she was far more complex than she appeared at first glance. Uncovering the layers to free her soul would be a tough task; but Sam knew he was just the man to do it.
Change in POV.
"Advent, Advent, ein Lichtlein brennt ..." In diesem Sinne eine schöne Weihnachtszeit.
Regards
Nucleus
English
Wonderful!!!!
Very poignant is how I describe your writing. It's always a pleasure to read your stories. Best of luck in the contest!!!
More Please
You have got to continue the story. It was a great piece, but it needs to be finished.
Cute.
Cute. Phenomenominally improbable, but cute.
-- KK in Texas
Another chapter pleas
Yes please another chapter to many questions still unanswered and it was a beautiful story for the holidays
A job well done
As always you've outdone yourself, good luck in the holiday contest. A fan from the beginning.
Another good one Lynn!
I was confused a little but had ti wait for the magic to take place. Had to read it all the way through. A sequel wouldn't be out of the question. Good luck in the contest.
DG Hear
Fine Christmas Story
The fantasy moved lightly across the two lives. Hope that the future is as pleasant for the young couple.
A Sprinkling of stardust!
A sprinkling of stardust shone out from this beautifully written story. It just flowed and kept my attention wondering how the ending would be and when I got there I wasn't disappointed.
Wishing you some of the stardust and good luck in the competition.
Delightful!
This is a perfect Christmas story! Make anyone want to believe in Santa again. Your stories keep getting better!
Dreams DO come true! Bravo!
Loved it! Christmas is my favorite time of year and even at my age, I do believe in magic and that there is a Santa even if he is in a little bit of all of us. Though at this time in my life, the Christmas's are a bit different, they are still anticipated as they were when I was young. When you tell your stories, I can hear the conversation and smell the smells such as the new real tree and the stews. Thank you! When I read a story, I am taken away to another time...a vacation. To their time and place. Well done!!! (Beau)
Tears and a 10
Once I get there tears out of my eyes... This was wonderful. I feel the magic stronger now than in 20 years. A 5 star rating isn't high enough! Ten, ten I say!
Great stuff
From: Agnes Brickman -- To: Abby -- I am suing for alienation of affection as Sam proposed to me when he brought my packets, hours before he came to your office! ~~~~ Really super Santa story, I enjoyed it immensely. Good luck in the contest.
Great Story
I like this type of stories. You did a very good one. But please check this part before you give your story into contest. He was intrigued by the way her eyes revealed her emotions. They told him she was far more complex than she appeared at first glance. Uncovering the layers to free her soul would be a tough task; but Sam knew he was just the man to do it.
Change in POV.
"Advent, Advent, ein Lichtlein brennt ..." In diesem Sinne eine schöne Weihnachtszeit.
Regards
Nucleus
Engaging Christmas story
Dreams really do come true--if you believe they will. A great story. Good luck in the contest.
Dreams do come true.
Very appropriate. Dreams do come true. They did for me 43 years ago.
with all the magic
maybe she'll learn his last name before the wedding?
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