by quale
This story is just as weird and sick as it can be. The whole idea of involving a porn TV reality show is great. Your story could have gone out of hand at many times but still you kept it credible and dark.
I can,t wait for the next episode.
....hugh jackman faced in "Swordfish" but for once I would like to see the guy able to control himself.At least he has a million bucks,so he can now afford revenge.RIGHT???
I think it has a big promise in it's plot. The idea of the show (a bit different from You Bet Your Wife) is great and can lead to so many kinky scenarios I can imagine. Just contact me if you need any inspiration.
You did a very good job here !!
Nice start. Needs more to make five star rating.
Just when thing were getting interesting...it ended.
the husband and wife are the show for all wish i could have a dvd of it
"starring at his wife get face fucked alternatively" is two mistakes in one sentence.
The 1st bet should have been lose the game and the opponent fucks the wife
The 2nd bet should have been if both husband and wife come then opponent and friends get to fuck the wife with him having to watch.
As the original story stands it’s wide open for recriminations and she wasn’t given the option of refusing the 2nd bet.
For equality’s sake the twist should have been if the husband and wife both come then both get fucked by the bikers, pretty sure he wouldn’t have agreed to that bet.
Of course this couldn’t work as a TV gameshow, the liabilities involved would be huge at the very least everyone would need to provide a clean health certificate and use condoms.