All Comments on 'Wife Wager: Episode 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Same old dogshit story

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
WOW

WOW!!!

Please keep writing.

misterbonemisterboneover 14 years ago
Maybe there's hope for TV

This story is just as weird and sick as it can be. The whole idea of involving a porn TV reality show is great. Your story could have gone out of hand at many times but still you kept it credible and dark.

I can,t wait for the next episode.

PistolpackinpetePistolpackinpeteover 14 years ago
Well,not quite the pressure....

....hugh jackman faced in "Swordfish" but for once I would like to see the guy able to control himself.At least he has a million bucks,so he can now afford revenge.RIGHT???

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

can't wait to read more episodes.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Wool hoooo

Great story -luv to read the rest.

DEGEDEGEover 10 years ago
Would like to read the following chapters

I think it has a big promise in it's plot. The idea of the show (a bit different from You Bet Your Wife) is great and can lead to so many kinky scenarios I can imagine. Just contact me if you need any inspiration.

You did a very good job here !!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Four stars...

Nice start. Needs more to make five star rating.

Just when thing were getting interesting...it ended.

lonerancherlonerancherabout 10 years ago
super hott

the husband and wife are the show for all wish i could have a dvd of it

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Good story line but bad writing always turns me off.

"starring at his wife get face fucked alternatively" is two mistakes in one sentence.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Incredibly unrealistic

The 1st bet should have been lose the game and the opponent fucks the wife

The 2nd bet should have been if both husband and wife come then opponent and friends get to fuck the wife with him having to watch.

As the original story stands it’s wide open for recriminations and she wasn’t given the option of refusing the 2nd bet.

For equality’s sake the twist should have been if the husband and wife both come then both get fucked by the bikers, pretty sure he wouldn’t have agreed to that bet.

Of course this couldn’t work as a TV gameshow, the liabilities involved would be huge at the very least everyone would need to provide a clean health certificate and use condoms.

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