Long time fan of your stories, but I have to give this series the finger. Sorry.
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Anonymous11/24/09
hmmm...
not that i don't like the story big guy, i'm waiting ( and hoping) that this villian gets is ass kicked by the husband as only you know how to write it. btw, thanks for the entertainment from all the stories.
by
Anonymous11/24/09
Well,
if you don't have anything good to say about this story, then keep quiet. I will keep quiet.
by
Anonymous11/24/09
Piece Of Shit
No more, please.
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Anonymous11/24/09
once a fan of yours but this shit is wrong.
she said NO. That makes this rape. I have enjoyed your stories because they were inane and outrageous and funny...this one is none of those things. You are the author and you bring the characters life and if this is what you fantasize about, you need some serious help. Now pardon me while I throw up.
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Anonymous11/24/09
NOPE!
Still a POS.
by
Anonymous11/24/09
Pathetic crap
I've enjoyed many of your stories for a long time, but this story is just pathetic crap and diminishes you as a quality writer. Why disappoint your fans JPB by producing such garbage as this?
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Anonymous11/24/09
well sorry bob
but this is really not your genre. your closer to 25 than 50 as your work in this story is unfortunately compared to your other stories way below your average. you haven't got the touch to make this blackmailing story erotic. even the sexscenes just by themselves are..... shit, sorry. nobody seems to have fun here. it's like a clown he always smiles but underneath his makeup there is the sadest guy on earth. that's the feeling I get reading this story. no lust no enjoyment ..... end that try or try to make it different somehow but 4 chapters and not even one good moment, shit
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Anonymous11/25/09
Be interesting when she picks up a gun and kills
him then herself. should be right after she finds out she has AIDS. By this time odds are she does.
English
Umm...
Long time fan of your stories, but I have to give this series the finger. Sorry.
hmmm...
not that i don't like the story big guy, i'm waiting ( and hoping) that this villian gets is ass kicked by the husband as only you know how to write it. btw, thanks for the entertainment from all the stories.
Well,
if you don't have anything good to say about this story, then keep quiet. I will keep quiet.
Piece Of Shit
No more, please.
once a fan of yours but this shit is wrong.
she said NO. That makes this rape. I have enjoyed your stories because they were inane and outrageous and funny...this one is none of those things. You are the author and you bring the characters life and if this is what you fantasize about, you need some serious help. Now pardon me while I throw up.
NOPE!
Still a POS.
Pathetic crap
I've enjoyed many of your stories for a long time, but this story is just pathetic crap and diminishes you as a quality writer. Why disappoint your fans JPB by producing such garbage as this?
well sorry bob
but this is really not your genre. your closer to 25 than 50 as your work in this story is unfortunately compared to your other stories way below your average. you haven't got the touch to make this blackmailing story erotic. even the sexscenes just by themselves are..... shit, sorry. nobody seems to have fun here. it's like a clown he always smiles but underneath his makeup there is the sadest guy on earth. that's the feeling I get reading this story. no lust no enjoyment ..... end that try or try to make it different somehow but 4 chapters and not even one good moment, shit
Be interesting when she picks up a gun and kills
him then herself. should be right after she finds out she has AIDS. By this time odds are she does.
Hard to like
Love your writing, just not this one. Too far out there... Sorry JPB this series should just fade away...
Loving it jpb,just loving it....
....(fucking up your bell curve that is!)
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