This story has been drawn out entirely too long and as much as I liked it..5 parts of teasing was more than enough at chapter 3. Learn to consolidate your stories into two or three postings at most with multiple pages. You killed the excitement thinking by having 20 chapters you'd have return readers..you just lost a fan.
I liked your story and as you said.... There should be more black and ethnic incest/taboo stories. I'm from West Philly also. I'm not so much like Maxwell, but I like the stories. Keep up the writing! Very good. Your stories can only get better. =)
where the fuck was the end!!!!?????????? no cum no bust!!! no putting his cock in her pussy!!!!!!!!! he only fucked her ass hole!! he didnt even bust !! or eat her out!!! she didnt cum!!! and she didnt put his cock in her mouth!!!!!!!!!! ur story is wack u dumb fuck!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Anonymous03/02/13
black incest
I fully gree, that there should be more tales of young, well hung black boys screwing their sexy slutty moms. Though incest is frowned upon, that's no reason not to participate.
English
grand finale? More like premature arrival
This story has been drawn out entirely too long and as much as I liked it..5 parts of teasing was more than enough at chapter 3. Learn to consolidate your stories into two or three postings at most with multiple pages. You killed the excitement thinking by having 20 chapters you'd have return readers..you just lost a fan.
Too Teasing
Too teasing man just let them fuck at pt 2 then again in the other parts
epic
Failur
i love your stories
Cool
Very nice
I liked your story and as you said.... There should be more black and ethnic incest/taboo stories. I'm from West Philly also. I'm not so much like Maxwell, but I like the stories. Keep up the writing! Very good. Your stories can only get better. =)
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where the fuck was the end!!!!?????????? no cum no bust!!! no putting his cock in her pussy!!!!!!!!! he only fucked her ass hole!! he didnt even bust !! or eat her out!!! she didnt cum!!! and she didnt put his cock in her mouth!!!!!!!!!! ur story is wack u dumb fuck!!!!!!!!!!!!
black incest
I fully gree, that there should be more tales of young, well hung black boys screwing their sexy slutty moms. Though incest is frowned upon, that's no reason not to participate.
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