Is was so erotic. I loved the two women and thought that they were a couple of very rare people on Literorica whom you might encounter in real life. However, you would not guess to look at them that they have a wild streak.
I enjoyed your story, but was hoping for more descriptive sex scenes. For example, when you mentioned "getting my brains banged out", more detail would have been great. Overall, I still enjoyed it. Thanks.
I really am weary of a cliche popular on Internet forums (fora?) where some wannabe cynic trots out a cliche as if it's freshly minted wisdom: 'Get a life'.
But I really am delighted when encountering a writer who *has* a life -- and her characters, ditto.
This has to be one of the most life-affirming contributions I've yet read on Lit: bold, brave, funny and veined with an honesty that pulses in every sentence, every paragraph.
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I really loved this piece
Is was so erotic. I loved the two women and thought that they were a couple of very rare people on Literorica whom you might encounter in real life. However, you would not guess to look at them that they have a wild streak.
From a middleaged male admirer.
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I enjoyed your story, but was hoping for more descriptive sex scenes. For example, when you mentioned "getting my brains banged out", more detail would have been great. Overall, I still enjoyed it. Thanks.
Magnificent and hilarious
Just a wonderful story. Thank you.
Have a life.
I really am weary of a cliche popular on Internet forums (fora?) where some wannabe cynic trots out a cliche as if it's freshly minted wisdom: 'Get a life'.
But I really am delighted when encountering a writer who *has* a life -- and her characters, ditto.
This has to be one of the most life-affirming contributions I've yet read on Lit: bold, brave, funny and veined with an honesty that pulses in every sentence, every paragraph.
Matchless, hickoryfarmer. Utterly. . . matchless.
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