All Comments on 'Twas The Night Before...'
by Just Plain Bob
- 24 Comments
Anonymousover 14 years agoJPB, you DO have a knack for unconventional stories! This one is thoroughly amusing.
-- KK in Texas
Anonymousover 14 years agoI just loved this well written story, you could just imagine the main character's mind working overtime on what was happening or seemed to be.
The story really kept my attention and you have a real good sense of wit.
Well done!
fregenover 14 years agoKinda thought that was where it was going but still nice.<P>
Thanks for sharing.
Anonymousover 14 years agoI would have found out when I busted out his car window with the bat, but thats just me. Good story, bob.
Emperorbiliusover 14 years agoJust loved it, despite guessing what may have been, I was still hooked to the end.
Anonymousover 14 years agoLike always when I see you are the authur it's a pleasurable read!
jack_strawover 14 years agoThis same basic plot has been done a time or two before, to good effect, and I had it pegged about a third of the way through. Still, very skillfully - and wittily - done by Bob. I've said this before, but Bob can be hit and miss with his stories; When he hits, though, he usually hits it a mile.
woodmanoneover 14 years agoVery well done and a complete surprise to me. This is not your usually type of story and I enjoyed it very much. Good job and thanks for your hard work.
I remain your fan
woodmanone
Anonymousover 8 years agoHell no. They both get tossed out on the lawn. No clothing, nothing. Not on my bed.
moblanealmost 6 years agoA good a one-pager as I have ever read on this site. Well written, I love your stories.
Sarbyover 2 years agoI hate confrontation. This story bothered me right up to the phone call. I don’t know why I read all the way through, but you got the odd smile out of me. Five stars.
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