not your old typical style... you have come a long way since you started writing the wank-off stories you did; not that I didnt like them! but this is taking it to another level with more details about feelings thoughts and such:)
really good, a hot story with a happy ending, like it or not. Sometimes we don't know what we really want until we stumble across it.
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Anonymous01/27/10
good read
carry on writing more incest / mature stories
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Anonymous12/09/12
Nice story! I wish I had an office cleaning lady like that to fuck!
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Anonymous07/17/15
Closure
The story is incomplete. Too many questions need answering. You need another chapter or two. It's a very good beginning.
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Anonymous12/21/15
A Terrific Story.... What's not to like?
this is the hottest story I have read in a long time. So it is not a literary masterpiece...Who cares???? It has all that is necessary for a good, but not prolonged buildup, buildup. You connected with all my trigger points with your description of Nadine. I have known, but have not bedded, sexy women just like her...My loss !!!!
English
Very Good
I realy enjoyed this story--the older lady wins and the young gold digger loses--he wins they loose---he now will have some happeness.
Fucking Great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Winner hands down! This is the best story I've ever read!!!! Love it! Keep em coming sethp!
Decent Story
I especially like it when authors beg for comments. This was a good story. Wishing you good luck in the contest.
im impresed
not your old typical style... you have come a long way since you started writing the wank-off stories you did; not that I didnt like them! but this is taking it to another level with more details about feelings thoughts and such:)
great job!
Now back to work you slob!!;)
Nice contest entry!
Way to go, seth, good entry. I really enjoyed it, you perv. Good luck in the contest!
This was
really good, a hot story with a happy ending, like it or not. Sometimes we don't know what we really want until we stumble across it.
good read
carry on writing more incest / mature stories
Nice story! I wish I had an office cleaning lady like that to fuck!
Closure
The story is incomplete. Too many questions need answering. You need another chapter or two. It's a very good beginning.
A Terrific Story.... What's not to like?
this is the hottest story I have read in a long time. So it is not a literary masterpiece...Who cares???? It has all that is necessary for a good, but not prolonged buildup, buildup. You connected with all my trigger points with your description of Nadine. I have known, but have not bedded, sexy women just like her...My loss !!!!
Job
Fucked his way out of his employment - what a way to go out.
Well
This piece is worth reading... Every Christmas. :D
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