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Great

I'm glad to see you are back with more on this story, the first 3 chapters were great and I was disapointed that you had just left it there. Hopefully you are back on track and can continue to post new chapters to this story. It has a lot of potential so I hope you see it through.

Good Follow-Up

Read the first 3 Chapters awhile ago so i re-read them to get up to Speed its good to know you have more to Come . it will be interesting to see where he goes for his Final Lock's.. And can he discard any of his Present Lock's to make room for a New Lock?

Greatness

Happy to see you back with a new chapter of one of my fav MC stories

glad your back!

nice to see you didn't just forget about the story! great to have you back and can't wait to see what else comes next!

More

More .... More.... I love the patience you have blessed Nate with. He certainly will make a strong Dominant.

great story

thank you for picking back up with this story.

Great Story

I just finished reading all 4 chapters. I love it! I hope you won't wait too much longer to post the next chapters.

Great story

Great story! Can't wait for the next chapter(s).

Excellent, more please?

Wow.

Hurry and write more. Eagerly awaiting next few chapters!!!

So......

Should we be expecting another 3 year wait for the next chapter?

Great Story!

Probably one of the best stories on this site! When can we expect more??

excellent story

can't wait for the next

nice

cant wait for more.

Keep writing

This is a fantastic story line. I hope you'll keep writing. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Mind blowing

Damn, I loved the first three, I never thought I'd see a fourth chapter after so long. Keep it up, all these tantalizing plot points are building a lot of suspense! Plus your writing is hot as hell, I wanna see what's gonna happen with Aimee. Please, don't make us wait another four years!

waiting

waiting for chapter 5

Never disappointing.

I have been a fan of this series for a while. The chapters come a little slow but they are never disappointing.

Great Job

Can't we get More soon

great

great plot, great imagination, can't wait for chapter five

This story had a lot of promise. too bad it was abandoned.

there was a lot to this story that could have been developed what with the magic book and the secret society that seemed to be after its power. and the storytelling was top notch. too bad the writer seems to have gone inactive.

Come Back!

If you're around at all, Woodchuckbdsm, please come back to this story. It was one of the 1st ones I read (and really enjoyed) on literotica, back in 08 or 09, and it seems a shame for it to go untouched for so long.

one of the best here

I agree with theothers here, it is a shame to leave this story unfinished. This is pone of the best stories on Literotica, it has a a very good plot, great character development, andawesome hooks, that make you want to read more. i hope you come back and write more,...or at the very least alow soemone else to continue the stories for you. I would love to read more here.

very good!

OMG.. this is one of the most interesting stories i have read on this site! I am waiting (a bit impatiently) for the completion of this series!

Return!

Come on, dude. This was one of the 1st stories I read when I found this site back in '09, and I've been waiting for more chapters ever since!
Please come back and give us some more.

we want more please

Very good so far but it needs to be finished.. You got me wondering now...

?????????????????????????????????

Guess "that's ALL folks". Getting interesting but ending in midair.

Big Sigh

05, 06, then again in 09; but nothing since. Unfinished stories make me sad...

REALLY!!!!

It was just getting good and now we are left hanging----

Needs more

have to agree with frankie this needs another 20+ chapters at least .....
A real shame on this site is the real great stories always seem to be left un finnished yet to find a series that does not leave me hanging as to what comes next