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Honeymoon at the Cabin Ch. 01

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by Anonymous11/27/09

Interesting plot...

I hope you have more chapters on the way.
This definitely has potential.
Interesting to read a story where the characters have more in mind than just a quick fuck.

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by AzPilot12/20/09

A good start. I like your style- smooth

The older writers know that things work better if done smoothly. It's life and experience.

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