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Clever!
I really liked this. You played the idea out to a tee. Good Stuff :)
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Bravo Tess a real delight to read well done
I see you as you read this
You hold my imagination
steady in your hands
transport me oblivious
to you from scene to scene
and there is nothing
to shake me from this enchantment
till I'm delivered to the other side.
I liked it. It showed thought-
And some care. Good job.
^
I think
damn, this is a good poem,
I'll give it a 100
...as I read this!
as I read it
it moved me to tears somehow
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