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by curiousk7512/01/09

too fast!

You started out with a slow build up but when you got to the 'action' it was all over and done with in a few short paragraphs! Focus on developing your description of the individual details of the 'act' itself and the only reason your readers will be disappointed at the finish is because they don't want it to end!

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by Anonymous10/15/13

Good ass story!

Gave me an erection.

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