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by Pistolpackinpete11/28/09

It's rough out there....

....points for at least a different take.

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by Ltirashin11/29/09

A rather good read.

The only thing that I think could have made it better would have been if the "John" had to wrestle a bit with some innner demons. Nothing like a heroic struggle between good and evil but just enough to make him seem a bit more like a "tortured soul". Other than that, very interesting.

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