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When you live a lie, the house of cards fall in.
Let me get this straight, she is pregnant and all of her friends and family know it. She is going away to have the child and if it is an interracial bastard she is giving up the child and coming home to be in a good family, what shit! If the baby is white she is bringing it home, also what shit. There is nothing good, erotic, or even interesting in this story of pure trash. Dump it!
Unreal
I feel bad for Mike. Hard to believe that he wanted his friend to make his wife more sexually active. He goes off to Iraq and comes back and what she wants to do is continue to be a slut to everyone and he must accept it is beyond belief. He does accept her way and willingly. The writing was excellent, but it was not the ending I thought was appropriate. That is some group of poker friends that he has. Real loyal and true. That must of been some wimpy military outfit he was with. Thanks for sharing your story.
DOUBLE FUCKING ZERO FOR A DOGSHIT STORY
I know JPB write cuckold wimps stories but this?......I am speechless......!
Waste of time
One of the worst stories you've ever written jpb. What a waste of anyone's time to read it.
WTF
Bob, you are a great writer, but you really fucked this story up! This was worse than a Jerry Springer episode! Damn man, I can't believe you wrote 6 parts!!! LOL....
Trash
Story was trash
JPB - this one was comical and so unrealistic.
Nice try but you already know that wimp ass male figures and ridiculously skank slut wives are a recipe for getting the emotional crowd going. But hey, at least you did a multiple chapter effort instead of your usual dogshit stories.
I wrote already
a comment halfway through the story in telling you that this is not your kind of story. read some other authors who write that kind of story. some are really good, they do exactly the same shit but somehow it's fun to read. this is not this is cold cruel without soul. no character from wife over husband and friend is worth breathing the air the poor kid from the story is breathing. I also can't understand any author who gets his sex kicks off with destroying some unborns future. you may hate adults but it's sick to play with kids. they depend on adults eventhough I almost never find any adults anyway in your stories. eventhough written as good as always, this time your story content leads to way under average.
at least the sex was hot
Man that was fucked up... but at least the sex was hot. I'm more of a "catch the bitch cheating and make her and her lover pay" kind of guy but I love your writing!! Keep up the good work!
JUST LET THIS GO...
THIS PIECE OF SHIT STORY IS SO BENEATH YOU... I DON'T HAVE THE SLIGHTEST IDEA WHY YOU WOULD EVEN WANT YOUR NAME ASSOCIATED WITH THIS TRIPE... YOU CAN DO SO MUCH BETTER THAN THIS...
One More???
C'mon, you have to let us know how it turned out. Loved the tail, and for all you detracters? It's fiction for crying out loud!
A prolog please?
Nice
Long piece of shit, bobbie. When you really try you are as bad as anyone, is that what this was about, well congrats. this really sucked.
time to go
time to finish it. this was weak compared to the rest of the story line. One more to wrap it up and do what you do amke it HOT..............
she'll lose her husband but not her family?
she's willing to lose the man she loves but not her family...and this is a story? Everything about her is ruined including her self-respect and this is erotic? IF you were a man, I'ld say to go fuck yourself, but considering what kind of a closet fucking homo you are...yoou'ld enjoy it.
thinks you all need to lighten up
I liked this. She was a slut and to be honest she wanted it. some guys are into go with it
men lose respect for you as writer and person
what going in country right now,wrong subject.with men fighting overseas and their wives home that fuck up.
I hated wasting my time....
....each of the 6 times I did it. It's like I had no control over my hands or eyes.Weird.
I hope that she gives him a incurable disease.
He deserves it. Yes, it's just a story but if... And I wish Mike the best and her, too.
love ur story
a very good story, read it at once. congrats.
Pathetic
No one and nothing here to like. Hubby is a waste of oxygen. The wife and friend are much worse than that.
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