by Sean Renaud
Thanks for writing the story that never was in the Batgirl series. I had forgotten about the sexual tension between the commish and his daughter. Will you do a follow-up?
I loved the premise of having Gordon ignorant to the fact that Batgirl is his daughter -- it's an even more evil twist on the standard "forced incest" type stories. You also did a good job at making the story accessible. I don't know anything about Batman besides the two recent series-reboot movies, but the story had enough info without distracting exposition.
I agree with COLD_EYES {I loved the premise of having Gordon ignorant to the fact that Batgirl is his daughter -- it's an even more evil twist on the standard "forced incest" type stories.} Although... I've always gone along with the premise, from the animated Batman episode, "Over The Edge", where (near the end of the episode) Commissioner Gordon "winks" at his daughter, which would seem to suggest that "HE ALREADY KNOWS" and "ACCEPTS" Barbara for "who" she is!