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Mary's Awakening

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/30/09

Excellent story

It was really very well written and an excellent story. My only complaint is that it ended abruptly, I mean, I thought there'll be some more. I'll be glad if you continue with this story line.

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by AzPilot11/30/09

Let me pay homage--

that phrasing was a bit too stilted for me and the rest was a bit much also. I dislike the crudeness that many seem to feel is necessasary, but you just about went over the edge the other way, a la red-jacketed novels. I liked the story plot and development and think you did a good job though.

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by KOTK12/07/09

Glad to see a story from you.

Fantastic story and I loved it. Keep writing and I'm looking forward for MORE. Thanks for sharing.

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