Okay, I've waited a long time for this chapter and it is fantastic! But she has to fix this. She can't let him walk out. He has to understand where she is coming from and stay! Okay, now that I have ranted. :-). Great twist to the story line I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens next.
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Anonymous12/02/09
Dang!
Okay, I've waited a long time for this chapter and it is fantastic! But she has to fix this. She can't let him walk out. He has to understand where she is coming from and stay! Okay, now that I have ranted. :-). Great twist to the story line I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens next.
I like the story, and your characters are exciting. It does feel a little bit rushed. But the part I have the most trouble with is the magical hybrid conversion at age 21! I do know this is fantasy, yes. But biology does not work that way, only trust funds. If it was based on maturation, it wouldn't line up with an overnight event, and it would be a different time for everyone. Instead this is like every girl getting her period at midnight on her 12th birthday. I know this is just a fun fantasy, and that I shouldn't let a small thing bother me, but to me, fantasy is better when it's slightly realistic.
Sorry! Rant over! I do like your story, and am off to read the next chapter.
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Slow down
This is too rushed.
Dang!
Okay, I've waited a long time for this chapter and it is fantastic! But she has to fix this. She can't let him walk out. He has to understand where she is coming from and stay! Okay, now that I have ranted. :-). Great twist to the story line I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Dang!
Okay, I've waited a long time for this chapter and it is fantastic! But she has to fix this. She can't let him walk out. He has to understand where she is coming from and stay! Okay, now that I have ranted. :-). Great twist to the story line I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens next.
more
waited for this.and loved it.can't wait for you to finish it.thanks.
Ok WOW
What more can I say. Please hurry with more.
Please hurry. . .
Love this chapter. PLEASE do not make us wait any longer for the next though. It was pure torture having to wait so long just for this chapter.
Pls update soon !!!!!
can't wait to see what happens next!!
Actually I check twice a day for your's story's updates..
So pls update soon !!!!!
awesome!
more please! more!!! dont stop!!!
you have to ...
finish it! i wanna know what happens!!
Having trouble suspending disbelief
I like the story, and your characters are exciting. It does feel a little bit rushed. But the part I have the most trouble with is the magical hybrid conversion at age 21! I do know this is fantasy, yes. But biology does not work that way, only trust funds. If it was based on maturation, it wouldn't line up with an overnight event, and it would be a different time for everyone. Instead this is like every girl getting her period at midnight on her 12th birthday. I know this is just a fun fantasy, and that I shouldn't let a small thing bother me, but to me, fantasy is better when it's slightly realistic.
Sorry! Rant over! I do like your story, and am off to read the next chapter.
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