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Imprinted Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/15/09

Nice Start

Nice and hot start -- I'm looking forward to reading the next chapters!

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by Anonymous01/02/10

wow great start to a story

cant wait for the next chapter..so hot.

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by gatorhermit03/26/10

I can't believe there's so few comments about this story

This story is HOT. Erotic as all get out and very well written. DS can write.

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by Firebrain04/02/10

Oops

And I am meant to be packing! That was hot. I love, love, love the first person for its introspective qualities and you use that so well. You have a subtle hand.

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