Dirty Train Girl

Excellent

Nice, well written and properly erotic

WOW!

Loved this story. Please continue this thread! Very hot!!

Awesome Story

A delicious twist on the customary 'male groper on the train' story. I was hooked by the premise and held in thrall by the execution of this short and sweet tale and look forward to the next installment.

utterly unique

Exquisitely delicious, and such a change from the usual self-consciously naughty train feeling scenes. Yours is intense, sweeping us up in uncontrolled erotic emotion. You are exceptionally good!

Slick, hot, dirty and smart

Loved it. You're on my favs now, missy. Thanks for a thoughtfully erotic ride!

This story put a BIG smile upon my face

Perhaps this is what Sheena Easton's "Morning Train" song was really about. Great story - erotic as all get out.

Mistress Red Pen says...Delicious!

Yummy story! Loved the pacing and the hot build-up to more and more and more... until the climax. I wanna ride that train!

Amazing

Wow. As I was reading this I could imagine myself in Louis' position and almost feel her fondling me. Just wow. Vivid imagery and not one boring paragraph. Pacing was excellent. Those 10 minutes came and went without me noticing.

More...please

Please tell me there's going to be more coming

Every time

I swear your stories make me laugh with the cleverness, so well done!

Magnificent, and hot!

I love your stories. They make me weak with sex and laughter. They make me cry because I wish I could write that well.

Wow!!!!!!!!
Breathtaking...

Wow

That was incredible. The ending was a real topper to the story. I need to read more.

Well written. I would love to read more adventures of your Dirty Train Girl.

great story but too short ^^

Masturbating in Public

"My neighbor and her girl friends watched me jerk off. They sat in front of me and watched me jerk off and cum. They liked it. I could hear them talking about me and laughing as they watched me beating off, so I jerked off in front of them three times. Each time I came real hard. They watched me cum and it felt great. They were all gorgeous brunettes. I loved it :)"

Absolutely Arousing!

The detail of this engagement placed me just inches away from all the action. I could feel her action, her energy.
Beautifully written, an erotic pleasure in exquisitely good taste.
Now I want to meet her!