Golf Shop or Victoria's Secret

Good Story

Thats the kind of "hot wife" husbands really want, his hot wife, not some slut. Thanks.

I wonder how long it will....

...take for someone to read something devious into her hiding the bag.-thanks for the read....

Good Story

Like the Story it takes you from Beginning to End with a Tinge of Suspicion & Jealousy to Total Love

Real good writing, thank you--

for a great dead. It's fun to read your stories.

BS

So the bag contained 3 or 4 sets of lingerie, but she couldn't wear even ONE of them for their anniversary because WHY? Because she was so much more concerned with helping her sister, and the possibilty that the set she wore MIGHT get damaged, than she was with pleasing her husband? What bull shit. He should divorce.

Their you go Pete, Read the comment below Me.

Good story Woodman keep them coming. Your stories are always interesting and always end with someone Making sure that "Life Goes ON".

Yes Life goes on...

to me too many holes in this relationship... Looks like a train wreck down the track

He is an Idiot

Sorry, I admire your writing but he comes across as a complete untrusting ass-hole. His wife should kick him out.
the Ct. Yankee

WHAT A DUMB ASS I FOUND IT FUNNY ,BAR THAT ONE TIME SHE NEVER SHOWED THAT SHE WAS CHEATING.

Foul!

She still committed a foul in the bedroom, she gets nice anniversary gifts, and what does she give him?? Typical, don't touch me daily wear nighties... The suspicion was well earned.

They are good together -

But it does show what secrets and lies can do to even the best relationship.

Humans are fallible they make mistakes - the outcomes are not always so much fun to live with.

Good humorous story 5 stars.

Interesting twist

to what appeared to be a predictable story. You fooled me!

A very good story and it fooled me, too.

I'm glad of the way it turned out. True love rewarded is a wonderful thing.

Clever story - I think

AS always, a well written story. But at the end I'm not sure I believe Sloane. I think he would have been better served by listening to what was going on in the house between the two women instead of just barging in.

Duh

Hey Wood you are a Big Fucking CUCK. You lost your Cock.

What's so stunning about this mess?

Is that he believed a word that came out of her mouth. Why did she need to be dressed in the sexy lingerie? She's a lying cheating cunt and he gets lost in the sex? Is he even the father of the baby? This is just so implausible I can't believe it. Even for fiction this was ridiculous.

****

Good writing but the emotion was a bit "flat".
I finished mentally saying " okay.... And?"

You have done it again. but your hero? sounds like a lot of guys I knew in the Navy, they went out a lot and bragged about their conquests from the bar scene but expected the at home wife to be celibate.
Ed Grocott
edgrocott@gmail.com

Ok but

This story just want not as entertaining as most of this author's stories. It was a little flat sort of Ho Hum.

So so

Seemed a bit trite. Would have been more ambiguous if was her sister in law. The possibility of girl on girl sex wouldn't be incest. Also, she never wore such stuff, so where does she get off giving advice.

That said, I enjoy your stuff

Chilley

Perhaps,,,perhaps not.

So why was Sloane dressed up to give her sister instructions. Were they both waiting for Bob to come home?

Okay

That's about it. Pretty boring actually.

Hmmm, NO!

When wives or husbands begin hiding things or keeping secrets from each other there is trouble in paradise. It is difficult enough to maintain and grow a relationship without the doubts and insecurities brought on by such actions. There is also the blatant disrespect shown to your spouse in such cases.
"Sloane explained. "My plan was to get something sexy for our anniversary and buy some things for Cindy too." So why didn't she wear the "sexy" crap for her hubby on their anniversary? Hurriedly spun lies never hold up to scrutiny.
Moral of the story: Something is fishy in the land of OZ or stupid husbands are always the last to know.
P.S. Get a DNA of the baby A.S.A.P.!
Just My Opinion, YMMV
Morgan DeWolfe