by Daniellekitten
I check your page daily for any new posts and i will admit to anxiously waiting for this installment. I've noticed some of my favorite stories by you are no longer available. Can you tell me where i can read them again. Keep it coming!!!!
I'm not enjoying this story at all at the moment, and I'm not sure if I will bother looking for more installments. I really hope that you don't have any plans on pairing Rhys and Harland, as it would be like... condoning rape and stuff. Bah
I have been waiting for you to post another chapter to this story. I like the story and can't wait to see where you take it.
for updating this story...cant wait for the next one. let there be a hero to save them...my heart goes out to Tippin and hope both escape soon.
Amazing work as usual...please say that you will be adding more to this storyline; i am hooked!! Honestly, i will be anxiously waiting for more.
jacinta xxO
i kinda like it but not the whole aspect where they are slaves never really like the rape and stuff
Wish you would add more to this story. I'm really curious about where you're going with it.
How trhis story is going under Non Human is beyond me. Not only is it inhuman but being written by a woman makes me feel absolutely ashamed. This story is sadistic and degrading to every and all females of any kind!
Shame on You!
There is absolutely no erotic in it whatsowver! I feel so angry as I have liked your other stories but this is just sooo low level!
Can't wait to see more of this story, I want to see how things will turn out for Rhys and her sister.
PLEASE REMOVE THIS FROM YOUR STORY LIST. I love all your others but this is awful it needs to be removed. You should not want anyone 2 read this at all.
I agree with other posters that the story is disturbing. What makes me willing to wait is the potential pay-off at the end. I really, really, REALLY want to see the bad guys get everything they deserve. I want the point driven home that it doesn't matter what "good reason" you give yourself, wrong is wrong, even if everyone is doing it. I want this story to shout to the world that just because someone did something nice, that doesn't give them the right to then do something nasty. Please, please, PLEASE finish this. This is a story that HAS to be finished. We need stories of really horrible villains who LOSE and victims being rescued and not just surviving but thriving. You can't have a really good hero unless you've got a really awful villain. You've given us the latter. I can't wait for the former.
please please please finish this story, i want to see these cruel men suffer for what they're doing to these poor girls!
Really good story, glad you're not holding back from harsh issues, can't wait to see where you go with it next.
This is a Great, but Sad Story..Please write Some More xo Your a Really Good Writer :]
Please add more chapters. I would love to know what happens next =) I can't wait to see if Harland really is a bad guy or a good guy... And what happened to Tippen that was worse????
Please add more!!! =)
It kind of gets at my gut and makes me feel sick.
I would guess however, having read some of your other stories, that there is going to be some kind of payback. I can't imagine that you're going to leave it like this...
Yikes. I hoped for romantic erotica. This was brutal and horribly graphic. Should be under non-consent as it made my stomach feel sick.
I feel so BADDD for Tippin. :'( Hope she an Rhys do get their revenge an find their way back to the jungle in on piece. Or at least won't have to go through the cruelty of their inprisoment.
While i enjoy your creativity, but this story really leaves a sick feeling .
I love your werecat story as it is well written with a good plot and excellent character development. I gave you 5-STARS for parts 1 & 2. Werewolf stories are my favorite but I like other human/animal stories like this one or ones involving furries. Keep writing as you are an excellent writer. Retired Army NCO