That was a really sweet story
Loved your story!
Your right. Tear jerker.
By the way, you don't have to shave the head for Locks of Love. It just can't be colored or permed but I love the reasoning of why she did it.
Great story i liked it alot.
loved the story because its a "LOVE STORY" and not a slam bam story keep it up
You weren't kidding, real tear jerker. Unbelievably touching. I'd give it a 5 if the rating stars were working
Too bad there isnt a rating higher than 5, . You were right a real tear jerk-er, warm and loving . Thanks for a wonderful story, Keep up the good work.....Bob
Not just a wonderful story, but a wonderfully told story. Completely engaging. Thanks.
So enjoy reading this story of the absolute love for the sister by the older brother and her best friend.
I feel you deserve as many positive comments as possible. This story was done well. It's obvious that all your stories are well thought out and deliberate, indicating a very complex and self-aware personality. You write very strong stories that are hard to form a comment on. We all realize that they are your stories and you give plenty of warning as to their make-up. Thanks for the entertainment...
I can't count how many times I have read and reread this story and it still brings tears to these old eyes. The love of a big brother for his little sister and the love of her best friend for both of them is very touching and heart warming indeed.
This was a very sweet, very touching little story.
I usually like long stories and was prepared to not like the intermittent flashback style, but it actually worked well for this story. Good job!
Much to short but your best romance story so far. I read the others but refused to grade them, this one was beautiful.
Definite 5* for this short and lovely story.
Any cancer story gets me - i lost my mom to it. That was fucking hard, i can't imagine losing a sibling (and thank god i can't imagine losing a child) but your story really gets the emotions. Really well written.
I liked the way you showed love between one man & two women. One a sister other a lover. The difference in feelings was done well.
Thanx. The 5th star.
Nice story but too short dnt like this lil stories
The Lit app version of this story is badly fragmented and truncated.
It's unreadable and needs fixing.
It was short and sad and oh so sweet! I wished that 10 stars were available, all I could give you were 5!
Thanks for the ride!
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