All Comments on 'Guarding Jennifer Aniston'

by JakesZA

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Nice

Any Jennifer Aniston story is good in my book.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Learn to write

I thought that your story would be interesting but then I ran into all of the grammatical errors. Misspellings and usages ectera. For instance at one point you say "manager slash agent" it should be manager/agent. Some of your misspellings include rooky- should be rookie. And the word is fucking not fucken, which is as far as I know not even a word.

JakesZAJakesZAover 14 years agoAuthor
Learning to spell

I'm not english speaking and only have word to correct mistakes, so rather tell me the story is shit than criticise the spelling...lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Love it!

Please more! I can't wait for Courteney!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
then get an editor

author if english is not your language then you can use a volunteer editor to help you. try it. it will make a difference

SexteenSexteenabout 11 years ago
Fucken good

Hot story all the way. Several typos but it was still cool.

phoenix23ninjaphoenix23ninjaover 8 years ago
LOVED IT

A very good story, well written, good job

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