All Comments on 'Accidents Happen Ch. 01'

Thought I'd pop in to see your stuff when I noticed you favorited me just now. This is great wintery imagery, RG. You've painted a thoughtful picture of the people too. Looking forward to seeing this develop further. Unrelated note: Mal's Diner rules. My wife loves their pancakes. Viva la Skippack! :D

you write well. I think I'm shivering a bit because of your description of the snow and cold. I was having a hard time with her obvious ignorance, but the second last paragraph set things right. She can be level headed and compassionate. Thanks for writing.

Good start. Eager to read more.

don't recall when I 1st read this--would give it a 5 now,instead of a 4

really looking forward to followig chapters

and tho really old now recognize author of one of the other comments-PacoFear-high praise indeed