Something for something. Fucking for flirting. Sounds like a fare trade.
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Anonymous12/09/09
NOPE nothing exciting here except for those that
Like cuck and fuck slut stories. I pity the writer and the two character the writer has created.
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Anonymous12/09/09
Pathetic
So flirting is equal to fucking? Wow, I musta missed that course in college.
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Anonymous12/09/09
I think you missed to many hours at school
in classical Latin. If you think baby characters are erotic, well I guess you have your fans , for an adult this is a short pornflick with no character nonsense talk and fucking. do you write for them? that would be an answer.
When I decided to submit to Literotica I made a vow to myself to take the good with the bad and not to defend or justify myself. Not to be one of those people who delete the bad comments. As I read these I'm reiterating that vow to myself.
I guess we all have hot buttons, that's one of the things I love about erotica, different things that either turn us on or way off.
As an answer (and yes I know that makes me a big ol' justifying vow breaking hypocrite)to the point raised where does this all go from here - it's nowhere. I'd given no thought to any of the ramifications of this action for this couple. It was just a dirty little snap shot. A brief sexual window in time. And to me that's the point of an erotic short story. The one charged moment-but of course if that moment hits one of your off buttons it's not going to work for you.
This story is obviously a hot button for quite a few people. Which I find interesting, as I don't see it that way - as flirting justifying fucking. For me it was more like jealousy over flirting led to a situation that revealed a new kink for a couple.(again with the justification, I know)
This may end up being one comment I delete after I have a little more time to reiterate that vow. So, in all honesty I thank you for your comments, it's given me a different perspective.
I thought the story was well written, red hot enjoyable. I don't know why these dorks read a whole story about something they don't like just to make a comment about it. I have a suspicion that its one dickhead maying several anonymous comments.
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Anonymous12/09/09
My Problem
Is the husband, when did her turn into a little wimped cuck, and does she care if now he really does fuck around. In real life his personality wouldn't let him be this submissive, he would fuck others also and marriage is over in a year. Can you say good writing but I hated the story, good, cause thats what happened.
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Anonymous12/09/09
Sorry I see the over reactions of this woman as
pure mental illness, not a fit of temper, but a lack of rational thought. It opens nothing to the couple, it only destroys their relationship.
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Anonymous12/09/09
hurting people
Wow there's alot of angry and hurt people over this kind of story. It didn't get me that way. It's not the best of the author's stories but I don't see the reason for the all the hate. It's sad that you're so upset by this. I don't mean that in a mean way but genuinely because it seems as if some of the commenters as reliving their own hurt through this story. All I read is that the wife flirts and dances with some guys and then when the husband asks her to crosses the line into sex. I think the author got in trouble using the word cuckold.
...good luck selling. There are so many cuck stores plaguing this site now - don't know why we need another. Nothing original or erotic in this story - just two unlikeable characters. How would wifey feel if the tables were turned - husband drags her into a bar and allows her to watch as he services some slut?
One of my main tests is, can a cuck story be flipped and work the other way (normally they don't work backwards - the man just comes across as petty and mean when he's cucking his faithful obedient wife)? I flipped this one and it works the other way (if DS lets me I'll post it). I didn't read this story carefully enough the first time to really understand the depth of the husband's flirting and why he did it. I take back my previous comment and eat my words.My only critique at this point would be that this man and his wife need to sit down and have a serious discussion about their sex life and what turns them on, but if that had happened, there wouldn't be a story.
English
So
what can he do to humiliate her. They can escalate this how far? This is not love, but rather hate. Not sexy, but pathetic.
Sick Fuck
Stupid story
Sexy story.
Please give us a part 2.
quid pro quo
Something for something. Fucking for flirting. Sounds like a fare trade.
NOPE nothing exciting here except for those that
Like cuck and fuck slut stories. I pity the writer and the two character the writer has created.
Pathetic
So flirting is equal to fucking? Wow, I musta missed that course in college.
I think you missed to many hours at school
in classical Latin. If you think baby characters are erotic, well I guess you have your fans , for an adult this is a short pornflick with no character nonsense talk and fucking. do you write for them? that would be an answer.
Hot Button
When I decided to submit to Literotica I made a vow to myself to take the good with the bad and not to defend or justify myself. Not to be one of those people who delete the bad comments. As I read these I'm reiterating that vow to myself.
I guess we all have hot buttons, that's one of the things I love about erotica, different things that either turn us on or way off.
As an answer (and yes I know that makes me a big ol' justifying vow breaking hypocrite)to the point raised where does this all go from here - it's nowhere. I'd given no thought to any of the ramifications of this action for this couple. It was just a dirty little snap shot. A brief sexual window in time. And to me that's the point of an erotic short story. The one charged moment-but of course if that moment hits one of your off buttons it's not going to work for you.
This story is obviously a hot button for quite a few people. Which I find interesting, as I don't see it that way - as flirting justifying fucking. For me it was more like jealousy over flirting led to a situation that revealed a new kink for a couple.(again with the justification, I know)
This may end up being one comment I delete after I have a little more time to reiterate that vow. So, in all honesty I thank you for your comments, it's given me a different perspective.
hot story
I thought the story was well written, red hot enjoyable. I don't know why these dorks read a whole story about something they don't like just to make a comment about it. I have a suspicion that its one dickhead maying several anonymous comments.
My Problem
Is the husband, when did her turn into a little wimped cuck, and does she care if now he really does fuck around. In real life his personality wouldn't let him be this submissive, he would fuck others also and marriage is over in a year. Can you say good writing but I hated the story, good, cause thats what happened.
Sorry I see the over reactions of this woman as
pure mental illness, not a fit of temper, but a lack of rational thought. It opens nothing to the couple, it only destroys their relationship.
hurting people
Wow there's alot of angry and hurt people over this kind of story. It didn't get me that way. It's not the best of the author's stories but I don't see the reason for the all the hate. It's sad that you're so upset by this. I don't mean that in a mean way but genuinely because it seems as if some of the commenters as reliving their own hurt through this story. All I read is that the wife flirts and dances with some guys and then when the husband asks her to crosses the line into sex. I think the author got in trouble using the word cuckold.
If this is typical of what this author writes...
...good luck selling. There are so many cuck stores plaguing this site now - don't know why we need another. Nothing original or erotic in this story - just two unlikeable characters. How would wifey feel if the tables were turned - husband drags her into a bar and allows her to watch as he services some slut?
I Changed My Mind
One of my main tests is, can a cuck story be flipped and work the other way (normally they don't work backwards - the man just comes across as petty and mean when he's cucking his faithful obedient wife)? I flipped this one and it works the other way (if DS lets me I'll post it). I didn't read this story carefully enough the first time to really understand the depth of the husband's flirting and why he did it. I take back my previous comment and eat my words.My only critique at this point would be that this man and his wife need to sit down and have a serious discussion about their sex life and what turns them on, but if that had happened, there wouldn't be a story.
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