All Comments on 'Haunted Prey Ch. 09'

I clicked the same time as Alauria LMAO. Seriously that was the shit right thurr! Loved the scene in the music room between the girls (I gotta say, I'm liking Charisma more in this story than her own) & Liam aka Angry Muffin Boy is still my fave brother.

Never saw it coming! :D

I was right there with Alauria, trying to will it not to be true. But is was. Wow. And now Lindsay has to make a choice. His past or his future. I would think he'd want to kick ass after his mother and Nadia. Things are getting very exciting! Can't wait til next week!

lyn is just a giant pussy. so loved this girl, but not only did she try to kill him but she actually killed his mother. fuck that and fuck her. frankly, lyn doesnt deserve to live after letting his mother die and doing nothing about it. stupid story, please stop writing.

I just loved this chapter!! So much was revieled. I cant believe Raife is Rachael!! Wow. I really didnt see that coming. I hope that Lindsey can kill Raife/Rachael. So is this the reason why Raife/Rachael wants Alauria dead? Because Raife is jealous or something?

Please write to the next chapter asap!! This story is getting beyond great!!!

Didn't see that coming! can't wait for the next chapter!!! Cuz I'm addicted!

Yo I soooo did not see that coming. You better finish this story and when is Nadia coming back?

damn U...

....that had to be by far the best twist to a story that i have read in a long time!!...so did not see that coming!!...i am desperate for more of this story.....

... I thought it was one of three posablities, but it was the best choice, congrats! Now what will you do next? Can't wait to see if I gess right! ;-)

I want more. I really did not see that coming at all. Can't wait for the next one.

"Whaaa?" After two pages of silent reading, I actually said that out loud at the end. I did not see that one coming. No wonder Lindsay's an emotional wreck. Hence the awkward morning after. Lol at "unique form of pillow talk." Btw, I so enjoy the kitchen scenes with the brothers. Like Alauria, I wouldn't be able to eat a muffin with so much gorgeousness staring at me. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Okay, I'm not American but for no reason I gasped out 'Oh mah Gawd' to myself just now hehe!!!

Wow, I certainly did not see that coming...amazing twist!

Loving this story very muchly!!!

Didn't see that coming until the paragraph before! Even so, complete shock!! Wow! Keep going!

WOW!!

whoa!! I so did not see that one coming!!

Shocker! I love it!

I love it

That b**** needs to be killed off right now!!!!!

awesome twist!

That is all...Just WOOOOOW!!!!!