Very good first story. I enjoyed reading it & I hope you will continue writing more stories like it.
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Anonymous12/07/09
Wish my wife would get me that for Christmas
Hot story with a lot of great stuff going on. Great first effort. Hope there is more to come from you.
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Anonymous12/07/09
Both Of her Loves
She goes out to get a present for husband, starts a sexual relationship with someone else, falls in love but its all good cause hubbie gets a woodie. Sorry, but this would be the last present my ex gave me, this is like getting hot pictures taken for hubbie than fucking the photographer, its not about Jake at all, is it.
Not a bad story, but you might want to give an additional read before submitting next time. You switched from 1st person to 3rd person half way through.
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Anonymous12/07/09
Same old swinger nonsense.
I know I would certainly send this Xmas present and the wife back to the North pole. Or lapland where ever they keep such cheating sluts these days.
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12/07/09
I liked the concept, but...
It was a great concept. I like the idea behind it. it's a little far fetched (but so are most of the stories here), and the rose vibrator seemed cheesy and unnecessary (especially since it wasn't used). I felt like I had seen this all before, and your perspective changed in the middle with no warning. Interrupted me mid stroke.
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Anonymous12/08/09
Someone thinking with their cunt again?
This story is almost childish at best.
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Anonymous12/09/09
You are soooo hot!!!
I would've loved to be your dance instructor! You can tell alot about an author from their writings. There is definitely something sensual and erotic about you. If you ever would like another woman's company...you just make me feel so erotic. Love ya girl - me.
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Anonymous02/04/10
If a man's involved it's not a LESBIAN story!
The title of my comment says it all!
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Anonymous05/03/13
Amazing
This made me cum so hard...i love it! Lesbian sex rocks... continue
English
Very good.
Very good first story. I enjoyed reading it & I hope you will continue writing more stories like it.
Wish my wife would get me that for Christmas
Hot story with a lot of great stuff going on. Great first effort. Hope there is more to come from you.
Both Of her Loves
She goes out to get a present for husband, starts a sexual relationship with someone else, falls in love but its all good cause hubbie gets a woodie. Sorry, but this would be the last present my ex gave me, this is like getting hot pictures taken for hubbie than fucking the photographer, its not about Jake at all, is it.
Not Bad but...
Not a bad story, but you might want to give an additional read before submitting next time. You switched from 1st person to 3rd person half way through.
Same old swinger nonsense.
I know I would certainly send this Xmas present and the wife back to the North pole. Or lapland where ever they keep such cheating sluts these days.
I liked the concept, but...
It was a great concept. I like the idea behind it. it's a little far fetched (but so are most of the stories here), and the rose vibrator seemed cheesy and unnecessary (especially since it wasn't used). I felt like I had seen this all before, and your perspective changed in the middle with no warning. Interrupted me mid stroke.
Someone thinking with their cunt again?
This story is almost childish at best.
You are soooo hot!!!
I would've loved to be your dance instructor! You can tell alot about an author from their writings. There is definitely something sensual and erotic about you. If you ever would like another woman's company...you just make me feel so erotic. Love ya girl - me.
If a man's involved it's not a LESBIAN story!
The title of my comment says it all!
Amazing
This made me cum so hard...i love it! Lesbian sex rocks... continue
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