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by Anonymous

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by vrosej1012/04/09

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Very sad. I had a sucky childhood too. Verbal abuse follows yu don't it?

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by lorencino12/04/09

Recommended

Recommended on today's New Poetry Recomendations thread at:
http://forum.literotica.com/showpost.php?p=3 2652387&postcount=2892

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by emma_tate12/04/09

eh

This has never been one of my favorite forms and this poem does nothing to persuade me any further. It is a difficult one to make , for lack of a better word, "flow". Practice makes perfect, some say, and I have no doubt that you will keep on. Nice attempt.

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by EroticOrogeny12/04/09

Nice job

Good handling of the ghazal and ties in well.

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