All Comments on 'Wedding Invitation'

Very good story. A nice frustrating build up with a well done ending. Maybe a 2nd chapter?

I enjoyed reading this story, you should continue with it.

I don't see any point to it. But then you are a dyke and you probably hate men so you thought you would write about a useless husband and sex starved wife. And then you thought I know I make the man a cuckold wimp to a Lesbian dyke wife. Write a sequel where the wife goes off with her new lesbain dyke friend and they live happily ever after as dyke and dyke. Dyke do get married you know? So why not write about that?

You seem to have a real hatred for women that are bi-sexual or lesbian. If you don't like it, why are you reading stories about it? Read stories in the "Loving Wifes" section they may be more to your taste.<br><br>

You have come back three times to tell my that I should not write about events like this, that is sad, that it is not erotic for you, that it is wrong and your berate me for this. If it is not right for you then ok I don't have a problem with that we each have our own tastes, morals, likes and dislikes and what we think is erotic. I am not forcing my views on you, you have a free choice to read something else. The story must have really touched you in some way for you to keep coming back to send nasty notes and rate it 0. It that not what a good story does, is it not suppost to make you feel, if it so touched you (good or bad) is it worth a 0 for my efforts?<br><br>

Stories told in written form, verbal or in a movie need to have some sort conflict within. If there is no conflict, no change, nothing to overcome then there is no story. You seem to think that all stories should be about loving happy couples. Not all stories end how we would like and not all have a happy ending or end how we would wish, it that were true only Disney would be making movies. <br><br>

I do not like all types of stories either. I am not really into BSDM but I have no objections to people writting about it, and I don't berate the people who do. If that is what they enjoy and it exites them then good for them.<br><br>

I happen to be a happily married bi-sexual woman. That is something between myself and my husband, end of story. I don't care about your morals or dislikes and what you think of my way of life.<br><br>

There are a lot of people who like this type of story. I get a lot of e-mails from people male and female. I think the largest group that write to me are women that are bi-curious and are looking for more information on exporing that side of them. Not all women have your point of view.<br><br>

I do appreciate your comments and your point of view but please be respectful or I will continue to delete your comments. <br><br>

This story speaks of a first time experience and is well wtritten I would say. It does not get bogged down in the back story and is full of the first time feelings of a woman who experiences a lesbian affair for the first time. It shows a wide range of feelings and describes very well without bogging down in details the events that occurred in the time line of this story. I would urge the writter to go forward with the writting if the auther is so enclined.

This was amazing. I can't wait to read more.

This was amazing. I can't wait to read more.

Extremely well written, nice flow. You captured the tension building up exquisitely.

Don't think much of authers who deleate, again, I really don't understand why these two are married. There is nothing between them that makes a marriage work. No love, no passion, no trust, no communication and no desire on her part to change it. Why girl on girl sex turns guys on is a mystery to me but I guess they are reacting with their dicks instead of their brains. Good writing just not my thing.

Thanks! I really like your story. I wouldn't recommend a sequel as this was a surprising one-time affair of passion. But you ought to write more in this same genre. Joe in AK

I absolutely loved this story! Thank you! I'm off to read the rest of your stories ...

My Regret Is That I Have Not "Cum" Across Your Stories Before Now ! But "Cum" I Have - Blush - Kisses

I Especially Love First Time Lesbian Stories. I Foundly Remeber My First Lesbian Gf. I Remember Her Very Fondly. I Have Never Been With A Man - And Consider Myself A "lipstick Lesbian" Not A Dyke.

I'm Happy That You Told "Mr. Anonymous" That If He Doesn't Like The Story Theme - DO NOT READ IT ! He Is In Complete Poor Taste laving "0? Ratings & Such Nasty Comments. No Wonder He Hides His Name. I Proudly Add My Name To Your List Of Fans !

Kisses

Kathy

I like this, take no notice of the negative comments. I got quite friendly with a woman I met at a wedding, we seemed to hit it off straight away, she was much older than me. She sat next to me and whispered in my ear,as her hand touched the inside of my leg, tell me to stop if you want to go no further. I wanted too, there was something about her, I opened my legs slightly. she stopped,follow me, she walked away,i followed her to the hotel lift, up 3 floors, to her room. She literally tore my dress off me, pushing me back and for the first time in my life a women was licking and fingering and eating and doing wonderful things to my wet pussy until I had the most intense orgasm, then laying there relaxed as she moved over me, presenting her pussy to my mouth, slowly licking her at first,she started to grind into my face, I held her and worked my tongue my face totally wet as she orgasmed. We went back to the wedding,i left my panties off at her suggestion,after about an hour, she again said follow me, straight to the mothers room, she told me to sit and she knelt between my legs and again brought me to an orgasm. We have stayed in touch, she lives 3 hours away but I have visited her on weekends when her husband is away.