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Very Good
But you should have added a twist at the end where Sue is actually the one in charge and not her husband.
**FLASH**
I enjoyed the story and the plot...but those damnable **FLASH** messages made my eyes hurt and made me lose my place inthe story a couple of times. Edit some of those out and you'll be good to go babe. =^_^=
Wasn't that good.
Keep trying, the flash crap was a bother and I wouldn't share my woman either!
BRADEHOFT, shhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
I had THAT twist in the ending, but it felt like it demolished the original intent. But there IS a followup in the wind around Sue's birthday..... nuff said...
You're a good writer...
...do you have a reason why you decimate a potentially fruitful plot line with an overabundance of mc reminders? It really( though it pains to say) only works in a "flash" story.
What a party, This should happen to everyone
once in there life. Great depiction of the sex between each guest. I loved the serving of the dessert. Thx for a great story.
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