All Comments on 'The Wild Party'

by TroyTower

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
That's It?

No more hanky panky? I hope you have a sequel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Sorry I missed which "PART" you went to.

Can't have been that good. You all turned into sluts and cucks and wimps. I would stay away from those "Parts" if I was you.

Zac_SherZac_Sherover 14 years ago
Nice start

Starts out very hot. I would love to read more and see what else (or who else) Heather does at the party :)

Youll probably end up with tons of hate posts from the anti-cheating brigade that regulary prowl the posted stories and insult authors who dare write about infidelity. Dont let it get to you.

Good story! Keep it up.

don87654don87654over 14 years ago
Orgy

I noted that there was no birth control mentioned. Maybe all of you want your kids that are "made here" to have chocolate milk when they are born?

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Good Short Story But Could Use More

This was a nice very short story, but some more development could go into the time line of the story. I would love to read more about the girls playing with each other, etc.

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