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Lost in a Lonely World

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by Anonymous

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by tazz31709/27/11

A POLITE, DECENT WAY

to accuse and deride those who sinned and put it in their face and closed the door. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by betrayedbylove04/01/12

Sad

In essence he forgave his family for screwing him over but does not want any parts of them now. When he dies in six months he feels that what they don't know they will miss. Little does he realize that it will make them feel horribly guilty for the rest of their lives. Good revenge from the grave.

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by Anonymous04/01/12

Traitor

buggered by the meaty cock, the fat cock smoked, betrayed!

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by cantbuymy04/02/12

did the fucking cunt

ever go back and tell everyone she lied about him being a wife beater?

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by Anonymous04/02/12

cantbuymybrain

Read the story fuckwit, or are you one of those mental midgets who try to insert extra stuff into a story? Classic closet cuck, can't write for shit but gotta tell others how to. Physician, heal thyself!

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by Huedogg205/19/12

what I don't understand is why so many authors destroy the husband

this is just another story where the husband is destroyed and the wife lives a happy life with her sorry assed children while the man that did everything for them gets fucked. WWWWWWWOoooooooohhhhhhhhhhhoooooooooo, I wouldn't have even let her kids in.

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by Anonymous06/16/12

I have read this story

four times now and still don't like how the man handled himself.

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by tazz31706/16/12

#2 A PRAGMATIC SOLUTION

with truth and false remorse from the cheaters and a polite GO F---Y---------. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Anonymous06/25/12

Don't agree with the husband's strategy

In my own life (and I am older than anyone in this story) I have always found that when it is all said and done, the truth is the best medicine for all our ills. His kids loved him, he was not senile, is he only minutes to live his loved ones wanted to be held and caressed. His former wife was most cold hearted and cruel for the lies about this abuse of her, she deserved nothing from him. Her husband was a predator and opportunist and took away his family and he to deserved nothing from him. Our hero might have felt better to have forgiven them for their past indiscretions, lies, sins and just plain asswhip behavior but I believe that truly only God can forgive somethings.
I wish the hero had realized that he needlessly hurt his children by denying them the little time he had left. Did their earlier rejection of him hurt that much and if it did how petty was that ?

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by Anonymous07/28/12

WOW!!!

This was a very profound story. This was probably one of the most unique stories on this site. Congratulations on a job well done!

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by Anonymous11/23/12

DESTROY

He should have destroyed their lives to the gutter of life. Give all your money to others not to a ungrateful family---DESTROY

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by jiminab11/27/12

Sorry

Mr. D I just found this way to hard to read.Not the writing nut the story. If this was a book I would not buy it. Not saying your writing is bad as it is not. It;s just this tough story. Thanks. Jim

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by JackWoody12/01/12

great story

Another slice of life from the writers, (or Dad's) perspective. This is what makes one a good writer.
Thanks.

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by Anonymous04/14/13

Fuck them All!

If I was in that situation, and I was dying of a brain tumor and those idiots were stupid enough to come to my house - there would be blood shed, pain, agony and torture! They all would be bound and gagged. I would start with Darin and dismember him while he was still alive and conscious. When he was armless, legless but still alive I would sit him in the corner and start on my ex. I would simply slap the shit out of her with my hand and then a belt. When I was done with her she'd be nothing but a bloody mass lying on the floor moaning. Alive but brutally scarred for life. Then the kids would get it - not as much, but enough to make them remember it for the rest of their lives. I would mark their foreheads with a T for traitor. I would piss on them and tell them to go fuck themselves. When I was done I would pull out my shotgun and blow my tumorous brains all over them! No, I would not leave them one red cent. I would have already donated it to charities of my liking.

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by cantbuymy04/15/13

the kids are garbage, the wife is a whore and the man needs to be dead.

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by TornadoTys04/19/13

Have a Good Life

The best thing the jilted husband could have done was have a good life and lifestyle.
Remarry and have mote children.

As for his telling everyone he was a wife beater, well she shoul now re tell everyone she lied and put a big ad in local newspapers, go on local radio to inform people she lied.

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by Anonymous05/31/13

Wow

There is the very definition of a man that was crushed. All the life crushed out of him. Its funny, people can destroy someone like that and then later come back and expect that person is the same one they were before they were destroyed. It doesn't work like that. I've seen it happen over and over.

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by betrayedbylove06/02/13

Second Comment

Fucking assholes. Cheating and disrespectful assholes. Fuck them all. Now I'll read the epilogue.

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by Drbeamer333306/05/13

The grammatical errors kept interfering with the story.

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by cantbuymy06/05/13

fuck the gramatical errors this was fucking fantastic. and the epilogue is even better. his kids are garbage and prove it. love the story.

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by Anonymous06/06/13

Well, actually he wimped out...

He got screwed over by his wife, her lover, his son, and his daughter. His payback..not holding them goodbye. Well, whoopee Doo.

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by Anonymous08/10/13

Life is Weird.....5

This is a very good story, we all have to make judgement calls, his made sense to him and I can see his reasoning. Too bad he could not trust another woman. Fucin Bitches(LOL)....bill

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by Tavadelphin09/27/13

Wow what a stort

He was right - of course - and he was completely wrong - of course -

He allowed them to destroy not just his present and his past but his future - no one should allow that - influence it? (no choice) - impact it? (sure). Completely dominate and destroy it? -NEVER!!

But he did and then he had to live with it so the end was the right one and the revenge he got, whether he wanted it or not, was complete when he died and they realized he knew it was coming when he showed them out. Proving he was better than they were - or not.

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by Anonymous12/20/13

I could...

...see it go down like that.

Wendy was going to be out of there as soon as a better deal came around. Dad just married the wrong woman (cheating, greedy, lying, scheming). Darin married the right one with the right kids, and was lucky enough that another trade up opportunity didn't come around for Wendy.

Dad's own fault he let it keep him from happiness the past 10 years.

With 3 years to live, I would waste a minute on that crowd.

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by TMSPTGR301/25/14

Almost

I much prefer a story where reality impinges on the story. It is a copout to have him kiss off his family by reason of brain tumor.

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by sdc9207802/05/14

Makes sense to me

After ten years, he is at peace even if he is not happy. Now he is looking at a future that is short and will be full of physical pain. Having his ex-family return now will only reawaken the emotional pain they inflicted upon him and further add to his suffering. And he is actually being kind to them as well. Real revenge would be to welcome them back with open arms so that they can watch him die, since they actually killed the man he was ten years ago.

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by user11005/15/14

damn, granpappy is still emo?

gaaaaaawwwwwwd! puberty is hell, even for seniors. i blame GMOs.

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by sugna05/20/14

They were shit

He was right, they were shit. Just because they were shit does not mean life has to be sad! Move on, have fun! Get over it! There is plenty of grief that comes from raising kids along with the love. He missed the grief as well as the love. So, call it a wash! He shot his DNA into the future and that is good enough! If he wanted love, get a dog, and then maybe a girlfriend, no need to get married again, he already had kids. Just have fun.

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by laptopwriter05/20/14

You were right...

Very sad, but well done. 5* from me.

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by firemanlit08/17/14

Not one of them would get any material goods. And the mortician would be bound by a written contract not to allow any of them to the services or cemetery. But that would not be revealed until the x-wife, her current husband and the not-his-children all confessed in writing to his attorney. All would be required to be at the reading of the will, at that time they would find out copies of their confessions had been distributed to their religious orgs, work places, and other members of the family. All of his wealth would go to local orgs such as women and childrens shelters, food banks and health clinics.

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by Anonymous09/13/14

Agree with two Commentators

Firemanlit and Sugna summed up my feelings perfectly.

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by Anonymous09/19/14

Inheritance

Fuck the kids. Donate your stuff to charity.

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by Anonymous03/04/15

What a wimp

This guy is way too casual about the entire situation. You raise a family only to have someone come along and snipe them only because he want's his own family. The fact that he had lost everything pleased me to no end. Being as rich as he was, it would have been an easy job to completely ruin the cheating couple. The kids at 15 and 17 when their mom deserted their dad were old enough to know what was happening and they knew right from wrong. Too much forgiveness for such a crapy thing to do to the guy.

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by Anonymous04/27/15

Fairly well written but what a spineless man!

He just let himself get railroaded. So many things he could have done other than accept a beat down by all concerned. And in his will they get nothing, absolutely nothing. The problem with this is that it's just depressing. It simply wasn't any fun to read despite being well written.

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by kjohns200103/04/16

They should rot in hell

The cheaters and the kids should all rot in the deepest pit in hell for what they did to him. Even in his pain he was a better man than I am. I would have either killed or crippled for life the cheaters and either let the kids go into state care or to relatives that only put up with them out of obligation. And he was leaving his money to them? Fucking hell, let them live without his money just like he had to live without them!

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by tazz31703/04/16

HE ACCEPTED HIS FATE

and made sure they did also. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Anonymous03/04/16

1*

What a fucking loser.

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by Anonymous08/12/16

Sterile

The writing is as sterile as the seducer. No emotion pathos. Buyer poor intellectual exercise

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by auhunter0411/02/16

all you negative folk

What you are reading and judging is a story of a fucked over man by a lying now ex-wife, who through her actions drove all his friends away.
What you are reading is the story of a fucked over, fucked up old man doing his best to get along in a fucked up world.
What would you have him do? Open his arms to those who turned their backs on him?
He and the others have nothing in common any more except for a bit of DNA.
They collectively killed his emotion toward them and now are crying false tears and trying to make things "right"
He has about 6 months to live-although Doctors have been wrong before-
I ask you why should he spend his last few days above ground making these heartless selfish brutal people feel better-salving their conscience if you will at his own expense?

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by xtchr12/25/16

An Interesting Take!

What an interesting story. I don't like to see cheaters win but these cheaters win. And even worse the ex gives up. The kids even gave up on their father...now after 10 years (and their step-father's business crashing), they want to make lovey-dovey with their father who they ignored for 10 years???? I'm glad the father held his ground and told them all to get lost.
I didn't like the fact that he did it because he was dying. I think the story would have been better if he just kept on living and living a better life...without the 2 kids, etc.
Thank you for the story.

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by Anonymous12/25/16

The follow up is fantastic. 5

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by Anonymous12/25/16

Why after 10 years?

The story doesn't say why, after 10 years, the kids all of a sudden wanted a relationship. As the protagonist, it wouldn't have mattered, but as the reader, I'd like to know.

As I mentioned in the follow up, having a wife betray you is bad enough, having the kids betray you is unforgivable. There is NO WAY I would have given them the slightest morsel of kindness.

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by TMSPTGR302/19/17

BS

Sanctimonious trash. What a whiney jerk mouthing self-serving platitudes.

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by MaFrepler04/19/17

Another author who thinks being a man means being an asshole

A total waste. The narrator is so prideful and so willing to wallow in pain that he is cruel to his children. What do we learn from this except for the author's sickness? I don't get it.

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by Anonymous07/10/17

The children deserve the seven stages of hell

At an age where they are capable of knowing that their girlfriend or boyfriend could hurt them by cheating, and yet being a fucking soul less kids to theirs fathers's pain as it was being an inconvenience to their life.....
What a piece of shit family could do that.
Hope they all rott in hell

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