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The Cult of the Lamia Ch. 12

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by lancewm12/07/09

Still well written but you seem to be taking

this nowhere now. The story used to have a purpose and it was interesting.... now it seems lost. I hope your next installment will prove me wrong. Gave you 75 because of the quality of the writing and suspended judgement until the next chapter.

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by LadyGenevieve12/12/10

Captivating

Fierce. Intense. Devours the senses. I must admit that I feel a certain apprehensive fear when I read this. Lost in the moment perhaps. A slave to Mark's victim's internal war. The power is elusive to mere words. It is enthralling.

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by Magus_Ronin12/15/10

Intense!

This was an incredible chapter; powerful, brutal, and beautiful. Your descriptions and imagery were amazing, and the internal conflicts were compelling.

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