by Isabella777
but you leave everything hanging does the hero and heroine make a savior .. do the night creatures allow them to live ?
I liked the way you painted this story like a picture for the mind. Very good. Ignore the comments from those that seem to be more worried about what they think are facts rather than the spirit of the story. The whole world thinks of Chrstmas a s the birth of Christ, so please, take into consideration the writers privilege to be creative and make comments about the story itself. Phrasing, grammar, that sort of thing. Keep writing Isabella, never know where it might take you. =^_^=